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• agreed! last two lines rock!! love all the vague but romantic images, i guess t...

  Writing comment May 12, 2010 at 5:56 PM
  

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• ah, what a happy poem! most stuff i write is dark because its hard to write abou...

  Writing comment May 2, 2010 at 7:21 PM
  

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• yes amazing imagery! love: is surprised when swirling debris knocks her unc...

  Writing comment May 2, 2010 at 7:16 PM
  

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• yeah, i think with your reading voice this piece will sound just fine :). Love t...

  Writing comment May 2, 2010 at 7:10 PM
  

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• thanks. there's actually a formatting mistake on the last line there, but do you...

  Writing comment Mar 25, 2010 at 2:49 PM
  

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• thanks. there's actually a formatting mistake on the last line there, but do you...

  Writing comment Mar 25, 2010 at 2:39 PM
  

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• woah love the contradictions. especially in the last stanza, "in perfect isolati...

  Writing comment Mar 23, 2010 at 2:06 PM
  

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• In Response to Photo 4

  Writing submission Mar 23, 2010 at 2:00 PM
  

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• this poem is such a great companion to the other one, though its good on its own...

  Writing comment Mar 22, 2010 at 7:53 PM
  

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• haha... well parts of it were funny. loved the "500 calories" note and "i can't ...

  Writing comment Mar 2, 2010 at 12:44 AM
  

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• And I'm sorry That I can't take your place I cannot bleed And they won't let ...

  Writing comment Feb 24, 2010 at 11:18 PM
  

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• thanks :)

  Writing comment Feb 24, 2010 at 11:14 PM
  

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• By the way, any better title ideas?

  Writing comment Feb 24, 2010 at 11:13 PM
  

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• Prompt- mixing it up

  Writing submission Feb 24, 2010 at 11:11 PM
  

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• Reading over this I guess its a lot darker than my usual stuff... haha sorry I s...

  Writing comment Feb 24, 2010 at 2:31 PM
  

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• needs a LOT of editing is the title right now

  Writing submission Feb 23, 2010 at 11:32 PM
  

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• Shell- a prospective thing for workshop? need comments

  Writing submission Feb 23, 2010 at 11:24 PM
  

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• Yeah, I also think that the line "puddles were my torment" is a little confusing...

  Writing comment Feb 19, 2010 at 2:33 PM
  

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• The silence begs to be broken But words would be bullets The moments dripping ...

  Writing comment Jan 19, 2010 at 9:53 PM
  

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• sometimes i just want to crack open your skull and see the colors that leak ou...

  Writing comment Jan 19, 2010 at 9:49 PM
  

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• wow, i like this one. i cant give any good criticisms but i just know that it re...

  Writing comment Jan 19, 2010 at 9:46 PM