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• I like this poem. I think the ending is more powerful in the first poem but I li...

  Writing comment Mar 19, 2010 at 6:01 PM
  

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• I like the ending too!

  Writing comment Mar 19, 2010 at 5:59 PM
  

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• I really like this piece. I love your begginig and the flow throughout. I could ...

  Writing comment Mar 2, 2010 at 10:58 PM
  

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• The last line is suppose to be I would know what if fells like to soar

  Writing comment Feb 21, 2010 at 10:36 PM
  

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• A Mere Reflection

  Writing submission Feb 21, 2010 at 10:28 PM
  

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• Where We still Discover

  Writing submission Feb 21, 2010 at 10:25 PM
  

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• Long After Midnight

  Writing submission Feb 21, 2010 at 10:24 PM
  

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• The moments dripping too quickly And the blood growing louder I love the end...

  Writing comment Feb 16, 2010 at 4:03 PM
  

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• This is a good piece visually! My favorite line is And I would have sworn that n...

  Writing comment Feb 14, 2010 at 11:26 PM
  

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• Well, I can't say I have ever really thought of it that way but this is really i...

  Writing comment Feb 14, 2010 at 12:55 AM
  

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• I LOVE THIS! Your ending is amazing. I can't think of any good titles for this b...

  Writing comment Feb 14, 2010 at 12:50 AM
  

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• I really like your voice and this poem is no exception. I think you could add a ...

  Writing comment Feb 12, 2010 at 5:13 PM
  

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• I really like where you are going with this poem. I think you should play more w...

  Writing comment Feb 12, 2010 at 5:08 PM
  

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• I love the ending the most because all the lines are really long and then there ...

  Writing comment Feb 12, 2010 at 5:05 PM
  

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• and my inspiration would respond I like this wording

  Writing comment Feb 6, 2010 at 4:19 PM
  

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• No this is not weird but good. The disturbed fairy tale is really good. I defini...

  Writing comment Feb 2, 2010 at 11:18 PM
  

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• I really like your poem. My favorite part is and the birds fly through banks...

  Writing comment Feb 2, 2010 at 11:12 PM
  

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• sticking to the saliva on my lips so that when we kiss the façade of a perfect...

  Writing comment Jan 17, 2010 at 6:16 PM